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🧙 HARRY PUMPER AND THE CHAMBER OF GAINS — Chapter 19 just posted!  |  HarryPumper_Fan has been writing this since 2007  |  "You're a pumper, Harry."  |  Dumbelldore approves  | 
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🧙 Harry Pumper and the Chamber of Gains: my ongoing fic (Ch. 1-19 posted)
🧙 HarryPumper_Fan Pump Wizard 📖 Author of Harry Pumper ●●●●● Joined: Aug 14, 2007 Posts: 2,441 The Gym Under the Stairs
HarryPumper_Fan — Post #1 — CHAPTER 19 NOW POSTED Yesterday, 11:01 PM  Quote

Hello wizards and pumpers. Chapter 19 is here. But for newcomers, let me share some excerpts from earlier chapters so you know what you're getting into.

HARRY PUMPER AND THE CHAMBER OF GAINS
Chapter 1: The Boy Who Pumped (Excerpt)

Mr. and Mrs. Dumbsley, of number four Privet Drive, were proud to say that they had never touched a barbell. They didn't hold with such nonsense, thank you very much.

Harry Pumper lived under the stairs, which was fine, because he had converted the cupboard into a remarkably efficient home gym. The Dumbsleys had tried to stop him. They had failed. You cannot stop the pump. The pump is not a thing that can be stopped. This is established lore.

On his eleventh birthday, a letter arrived by owl. It read: "Dear Mr. Pumper, We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted at Hogwarts School of Lifting and Gains. Term begins September 1. Please find enclosed a list of all necessary equipment: one (1) Olympic barbell, one (1) enchanted squat rack, one (1) wand (optional, the barbell is the real wand)."

HARRY PUMPER AND THE CHAMBER OF GAINS
Chapter 7: The Sorting Bench Press (Excerpt)

"Ah," said the Sorting Barbell, which was a sentient barbell that rested on a bench press at the front of the Great Gym. "Difficult. Very difficult. Plenty of muscle, I see. And a good mind. There's talent, oh my goodness, yes — and a nice thirst to prove yourself, now that's interesting. So where shall I put you?"

"Not Cardio," Harry whispered desperately. "Not Cardio."

"Not Cardio, eh?" said the Sorting Barbell. "Are you sure? You could be great, you know, it's all there in your VO2 max, and Cardio will help you on the way to... no? Well, if you're sure — better be GAINTHERINDOR!"

The table on the far right erupted in cheers. Every member of Gaintherindor was visibly pumped.

HARRY PUMPER AND THE CHAMBER OF GAINS
Chapter 19: The Chamber of Gains (Excerpt)

The entrance to the Chamber of Gains was behind the third-floor squat rack that no one used because it was slightly wobbly. Harry pressed his hand to the barbell and spoke in Pumpletongue — the language of gains, which only he could speak, which sounded to everyone else like aggressive grunting.

"Open," he hissed, in Pumpletongue.

The squat rack slid aside to reveal a staircase descending into golden light.

At the bottom stood Tom Ridlift — young, impossibly veiny, his form perfect in a way that was wrong, because no one's form should be that perfect. It was the perfection of someone who had sacrificed something human for it.

"Hello, Harry," said Tom Ridlift. "I've been waiting for you. I've been waiting for someone who understands that the pump is not a means to an end. The pump IS the end. The pump is all there is."

"You're wrong," said Harry Pumper. "The pump is the beginning."

He lifted his wand. It was a barbell. It had always been a barbell.

Chapter 19 — excerpt shown (full chapter: 6,112 words) | Running total: ~52,000 words
📝 Author's note: 19 chapters. Since 2007. I know it's slow. I know some of you have been waiting since the Bush administration. I also know that Dumbelldore's big speech in Chapter 14 made at least three people cry based on your replies, so I think the pace is justified. Chapter 20 will introduce Pumbledore's Army. Stay tuned.

— HarryPumper_Fan
— HarryPumper_Fan | Harry Pumper and the Chamber of Gains [WIP] | "You're a pumper, Harry." | 19 chapters posted | The houses: Gaintherindor, Pumplepuff, Ravengains, Cardio (no one wants Cardio)
🧙‍♂️ MugglePumper Gaintherindor Prefect ●●●●○ Joined: Sep 3, 2007 Posts: 1,223 Common Room (it's a gym)
MugglePumper — Post #1,880 Yesterday, 11:18 PM  Quote

I HAVE BEEN REFRESHING SINCE 9 PM.

"The pump is not a means to an end. The pump IS the end." vs. "The pump is the beginning." THIS IS THE THEMATIC CONFRONTATION I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR SINCE CHAPTER 4 WHEN YOU FIRST INTRODUCED RIDLIFT.

Also "Not Cardio" remains the funniest line in all of pump fiction. I have been quoting it at the gym for 18 years. People think I'm insane. They're not wrong but they're also not understanding the reference.

The Sorting Barbell sorting people into Gaintherindor, Pumplepuff, Ravengains, and Cardio is genuinely one of the best worldbuilding decisions in this entire forum's fiction section. You could have made four lifting-related houses but you made three lifting houses and Cardio, the house nobody wants, and that is PERFECT.

Chapter 20 please. I'll wait another 18 years if I have to but please don't make me.

— MugglePumper | Sorted into Gaintherindor (2007) | "Not Cardio. Not Cardio." | I have said this at every gym I have ever been to
🔎 PumpLoreScholar Lore Analyst 📚 Cross-Reference Expert ●●●●○ Joined: Feb 14, 2019 Posts: 2,882 The library. The gym library.
PumpLoreScholar — Post #1,881 Today, 12:04 AM  Quote

Cross-referencing this with the broader pump literary universe:

1. Pumpletongue — the "language of gains that sounds like aggressive grunting" — this is consistent with DostoPumper_F's description of the primal pump language in Pump and Pumishability, Chapter 12. The pump fiction extended universe is becoming internally consistent and I don't think the authors are coordinating.

2. Tom Ridlift's philosophy that "the pump IS the end" is essentially the Omega Pump position. He's a villain because he's reached the Omega Pump conclusion. Harry's counter — "the pump is the beginning" — is the Ancient Lore position. This fic is embedding the real forum schism into its plot.

3. "His form perfect in a way that was wrong, because no one's form should be that perfect" — this is genuinely good writing. I'm putting this on my spreadsheet.

Four pump novels running simultaneously on this forum. What a time to be literate.

— PumpLoreScholar | Cross-Reference Spreadsheet v47 | Tracking: Pump of the Rings, Harry Pumper, Pump & Pumishability, Star Pump | "The extended pump universe is real and I can prove it."
🏋️ SortingBarbell_Bot Novelty Account ●○○○○ Joined: Oct 2007 Posts: 4,441 The Great Gym, Hogwarts
SortingBarbell_Bot — Post #1,882 Today, 6:33 AM  Quote

Hmm, let me see. Ah yes. Another reader wanting to be sorted.

I see courage... I see dedication... I see a refusal to do cardio under any circumstances...

GAINTHERINDOR!

(I have posted this 4,441 times. I created this account in 2007 specifically to sort people into pump Hogwarts houses and I have never posted anything else. I have been sorted into Pumplepuff by my own algorithm. I don't want to talk about it.)

— SortingBarbell_Bot | I sort people. That's it. That's the whole account. | Gaintherindor: 1,882 | Pumplepuff: 1,204 | Ravengains: 914 | Cardio: 441 (sorry)
🧙 HarryPumper_Fan Pump Wizard 📖 Author of Harry Pumper ●●●●● Joined: Aug 14, 2007 Posts: 2,442 The Gym Under the Stairs
HarryPumper_Fan — Post #1,883 Today, 8:44 AM  Quote

MugglePumper: You've been here since Post #3. Eighteen years. I don't take that lightly.

PumpLoreScholar: I want to confirm that I have NOT been coordinating with DostoPumper_F. The fact that our pump languages are consistent is either coincidence or evidence that the pump itself has a canonical form that multiple authors are independently channeling. I'm going with the second interpretation because it's more interesting and also because it frightens me slightly.

SortingBarbell_Bot: 4,441 sortings. You are the most dedicated novelty account on this forum and possibly on the internet. I am honored.

Chapter 20 will introduce Pumbledore's Army — a secret gym club that meets in the Room of Requirement (which always manifests as whatever gym equipment you need most). Draco Malflex will attempt to shut it down. He will fail. He always fails. His father will hear about this.

ETA: sometime between now and the heat death of the universe. Probably closer to now.

— HarryPumper_Fan | "It is our gains, Harry, that show what we truly are, far more than our genetics." — Dumbelldore, Chapter 14 | Chapter 20: Pumbledore's Army | coming when it's coming
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